Peer Review

While reading Shakira's webtext, it helped me realize that i need to add in more links and more information about fad dieting. It seemed like she was really interested about her topic, and it made me interested to learn more about it. Everything flowed really nicely, and made her seem like she did her research and new alot about what she was talking about.

When i read the peer review that Tom wrote for me, i was helped alot. He mentioned things that were good, so i knew i was doing something right, and he also helped me with possible topics to talk about--which i did. I was able to put better points in my webtext because of his good ideas. It seems easier and more put together now that it is finished, and i'm glad he said some of the things he said.

After having the conference today with Crystal, it made me realize that i needed to put more information in where it was needed. She was really clear about what she wanted me to add in, and it made it easier to do my revisions. I also got some good ideas to add in as well and also i was able to make my sections better. I do believe she helped me and i'm glad she told me what she did, because usually other people might be a little nervoous to tell you something that isn't right in your paper because they don't want to hurt you, but she was honest and that helps more.

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